Does anyone care, Will you find me where, I hide away, In my solemn corner, Alone I stay. What's wrong, and who's right, pounding in my ears, as I won't sleep tonight. Gracing what is real, holding tight on to what's left to feel, Periless self torture, Neverending song. I send you my best, I know now what to do, Drift away in my pensive corner, Where alone I stay.
i thought this was good and i liked the langage used but i don't get a strong enough emotion from it. may that'd just me but apart from that, it was good. i do think this bit is fab!
good work but i can't really feel what emotion your trying to portray, meh so long as you know thats all that matters... why not call it "Alone I Stay" ?
On LPA's forum index page the title gets shortened to "I cant decide on a tit", and well quite frankly..some days I cant either. There's so many nice ones out there. But nice work anyways.
I was about to post a joke about that too, then I'm like "Nah, I shouldn't. I'm an admin, I have to show some level of maturity." Then I come into the thread to see the head honcho doing exactly what I decided against doing
I was about to post a joke about that too, then I'm like "Nah, I shouldn't. I'm an admin, I have to show some level of maturity." Then I come into the thread to see the head honcho doing exactly what I decided against doing [/b][/quote] DAMN RIGHT. I set such a good example dont I?
I noticed that too, I got quite confused. But this song is really good! I'm amazed i've never read your work before, keep up the good work!