I can't decide on a title right now.

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    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

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    Does anyone care,
    Will you find me where,
    I hide away,
    In my solemn corner,
    Alone I stay.

    What's wrong,
    and who's right,
    pounding in my ears,
    as I won't sleep tonight.

    Gracing what is real,
    holding tight on to what's left to feel,
    Periless self torture,
    Neverending song.

    I send you my best,
    I know now what to do,
    Drift away in my pensive corner,
    Where alone I stay.
     
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    fallenangel

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    i thought this was good and i liked the langage used but i don't get a strong enough emotion from it. may that'd just me but apart from that, it was good.

    i do think this bit is fab! ;)
     
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    bleeding rose

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    GOOD WORK! ^_^
     
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    a life in ashes

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    good work but i can't really feel what emotion your trying to portray, meh so long as you know thats all that matters...

    why not call it "Alone I Stay" ?
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good stuff.
     
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    Louis

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    Tizzite. Keep up the good work.
     
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    Derek

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    On LPA's forum index page the title gets shortened to "I cant decide on a tit", and well quite frankly..some days I cant either. There's so many nice ones out there.

    But nice work anyways.
     
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    Todd

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    I was about to post a joke about that too, then I'm like "Nah, I shouldn't. I'm an admin, I have to show some level of maturity." Then I come into the thread to see the head honcho doing exactly what I decided against doing :lol: :lol:
     
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    Derek

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    I was about to post a joke about that too, then I'm like "Nah, I shouldn't. I'm an admin, I have to show some level of maturity." Then I come into the thread to see the head honcho doing exactly what I decided against doing :lol: :lol: [/b][/quote]
    DAMN RIGHT. I set such a good example dont I? :lol:
     
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    Anya

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    I noticed that too, I got quite confused. :lol:


    But this song is really good! I'm amazed i've never read your work before, keep up the good work!
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Thanks guys..sorry about that getting shortened I didn't know it would...Rofl.

    <3 -Elaine
     

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