I stand alone

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by The Outsider, Oct 30, 2005.

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    I never knew
    Quite how to play.

    This game they call,
    Living a life.

    They say you trip,
    But you get up again.

    To regain your stance,
    To regain your position.

    Thought about how it was,
    The dream that i knew.

    The dream that turned out,
    To be true and all.

    Tripped and fell over,
    To the sinking of the atmosphere.

    Never again, to regain my feet,
    In this society, I stand alone.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    The title is the same as a godsmack song, which for me makes it........ i don't know, it's just annoying when people use titles from songs...... but that's not your fault at all.

    It seems a bit short i thought, and definately not your best. It just didn't have the depth to it. I know you can do better, keep it up.
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

    ChooseYourPoison nymphetamine

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    Ok, it's good, but the thing is..I agree with the fact that because it's a Godsmack titled song, its kinda..weird. Cause like, I think of Sully Erna singing it, then I think of the actual song.

    Hm, but maybe try renaming it?
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    lol dont know godsmack songs though
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    Hear me, hear me, this is crazy greatness.
     

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