I just finished this tonight and I'm unsure of it. Make sure you give me some honest feedback. In My Town Mid-December and it finally feels like winter Woke up late with good intent but dear The ground is freezing over here In my town In this place I feel that I must be a voyeur Sketches, maps, statistics on my walls But every creature’s bound to crawl In my town I wrote the scriptures; let them scatter up on Main Street Spread my open book opinions there But nobody knows how to care In my town Spinning, stupid, you suggest I drank you pretty But I’m dizzy and you’re all I’ve got It's true that I’m just glad I’m not In my town I spell it out in demographics Shout my words over the traffic “There’s no shame in feeling stuck out here But nothing good comes out of fear” You live for someone else Or maybe God or love or health And I’m still living just for life I’m not tied down to what is right Shoddy answers in a world you took for granted I know more than what’s confined to here The masses speak the least sincere In my town Favored notions, we’re suspended in an ocean With this thought momentum changing tides Through words that would be floating by In my town I’m not a saint, not even close But I’ve got something more to show Than figureheads and presidents To their sergeants and their patriots I’ve done fuck all for history But I’ve traded my adversity For long-shots out of this town With the voice of reason written out So you said, “You ought to figure That the world could be much bigger If we stepped in, dared to notice That the winter’s at its’ coldest And we’re still alive”