Insomnia (You Keep Me Awake At Night)

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    No, this has nothing to do with me being in love with my neighbours. If you dare insinuate that, I'll send Mike Myers (Halloween) after you with a chainsaw. Booya.

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    You keep me awake at night
    I can’t sleep because of you
    You are the personification of insomnia
    Darling I’m so in love with you

    Yes, I exaggerated with that last line
    I loved you but now you’re wasting my time
    I’ve not slept for weeks on end
    Don’t you think it’s becoming a trend?
    In our relationship
    We fuck and we fight
    That doesn’t strike me as really all right
    For a relationship as loving as ours
    Hell, it was loving for the first few hours
    Then the nympho tuned right in
    You’re the one who wrote the book on sin
    I looked at you as my angel fallen from grace
    Baby you’re a devil with an Angel’s face

    You keep me awake at night
    I can’t sleep because of you
    You are the personification of insomnia
    Love, I’m so fed up of you

    Don’t you ever take a break?
    Baby it’s more than I can take
    I pray for the soul that has to put up with you
    ‘Cause sure as hell, I know we’re through
    I can’t keep up with your demanding urges
    But when I give up the hell hound emerges
    I don’t know how I fell in love with you
    I guess I thought you loved me too

    You keep me awake at night
    I can’t sleep because of you
    You are the personification of insomnia
    Yeah, now I’m staying away from you

    I like to think that there was a time
    When you loved me and I loved you
    When we lived together in a cute little house
    With a white picket fence
    And one dog and one cat
    And maybe two point five kids
    But then I remember that,
    That never happened
    If we’d have gotten married
    It would’ve been different
    Las Vegas motel
    And a priest dressed like Elvis
    But baby I’m tired
    I’m so tired of you

    You keep me awake at night
    I can’t sleep because of you
    You are the personification of insomnia
    If you’d loved me, you would’ve been true


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    If you review, you get cookies and ice cream. How bout that?
     
    Last edited: Dec 25, 2005
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    Christopher

    Christopher It's what you like, not what you're like. Über Member

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    Awesome work !!!
    i don't get were some people get there inspiration to right something that good wish i could write that good.
    haven't found my talent (yet) but you found yours

    will you review mine ???


    edit: lol, i could not spell back in 2005 :p
     
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    Razan

    Razan SUGAAAR!

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    Amazing, and I'm not just saying that because I want ice cream and cookies...jk.
    Seriously, this would make such a good song!
     
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    a life in ashes

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    Awesome work, like stOf said, where do you get your inspiration, this is so much better than anything I've written.
     
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    heshboy

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    Mali this is great work. Great is my highest standard in rating, and you deserve it.
     
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    Arhaz

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    neat. hilarious at some points.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Thankees all!

    @Arhaz- Is that a good thing? I was trying to make it humorous, but I'm not sure if it came off quite right.

    *cookies and ice cream to all who replied *
     
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    Arhaz

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    good thing...
     

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