this isnt actually a poem..just a whole lot of thoughts that ran though my mind please comment... Just leave me alone I don’t feel for company I wanna wallow alone in my misery No one understands……..solo….. unique… There is no shoulder and happiness is like the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow – chase it, pursue it but you will never hold it. Just when you feel you have found it It disappears like a mirage Confusion in my mind – disturbed thought lines….. Trying to find direction….. Wondering & pondering Asking in silence but no one sees Whats bothering me – I don’t know A candle of Hope is burning - but for how much longer ?
This is the kind of stuff I write too, so I feel it's sort of something that can't really be judged because it wasn't written with consideration to readers but just a what-comes-out-comes-out thing rather than an intended work of art or something. Basically, I don't need to have my raw thoughts and emotions judged but, still, if you post it on a message board, you're asking for it to be read and/or judged in an artistic caliber, I guess.