hey every one its jester this is my most recent song i have wrote, its slightly based of the idea of a song i have previosly posted on here called unfinished buisness, if you have read unfinished buisness please tell me which one you think is better, left for dead verse 1: lying down flat on the floor, must of been something i said, father beats me to a pulp, mother runs off and leaves me for dead, and now i cant get it out its all locked up inside my head, i sometimes wish it was you lying down there instead. (interlude) verse 2: everything carries on normal, nothing is ever said, with no one to run to i keep it locked up inside my head, and now sweet little dreams of revenge follow on instead, my favorites the one where your lying down there instead chorus: because you left me for dead. i guess you chose to follow him instead, because you left me for dead, next time youll be the one lying down there instead and i wont come... i'll leave you all alone in distress and then you'll be the one who feels as if youve been left for dead (guitar solo) chorus: because you left me for dead. i guess you chose to follow him instead, because you left me for dead, next time youll be the one lying down there instead and i wont come...
I'm telling you, YOU are an AMAZING writer, i would really love to hear this stuff played. It is amazing. Just keep writing, great song. LOVED IT, keep writing!!!!!!!!
wow thanks, im actually writing the guitar parts for this song right now, our band are currently playing as a cover band for my older brothers band, but once we think we have enough material we will start playing our own gigs. and hopefully some time in the future we will record some stuff, so one day you might dust hear our music. thanks for the comments!