I've been working for a couple days on these lyrics. What do you think? Be honest. V1 I wake up in the same thoughts again The same exact feelings as yesterday When will all of this end Everyday is the same as to me I've dislocated myself from my soul Trapped up inside this hollow hole CH I can't breathe with you around me We can just leave this behind Get the fuck away from me Let me take back what's mine V2 Everyday's the same And everyday brings more pain It feels like the battle never ends Like a game to test my strength within Broken down Nothing but your skin and bones Wrapped inside your lies It's time to say goodbye B Don't defy You know you lied Here's my goodbye Don't defy You know you lied Here's my goodbye
Honestly? It seems a little unfinished to me and one or two lines in the first verse seem a little off, but I liked the idea and most of the writing itself.