Here's something I wrote a few weeks ago. It started off more personal but developed into a story of it's own. Feedback whether positive or negative is much appreciated; I won't improve without it. I am alive but I'm barely here A god damn liar with my daddy's fears An appropriate formation in a blackened isolation Standing all alone in a world of my fright But I guess I'm alright It takes me on It breaks me down It fucks me up It turns me down At least she knows, Who I am But who am I to her? I find myself at the end of the road I fear there is one thing left I can do I stare down the world I'll never know My thoughts away in a place I'll never show But I guess I can fight It takes me on It breaks me down It fucks me up It turns me down She let's me know, Who I am But who am I to her? I am a liar, yeah the one that you trust The god damn liar of my child's fears An open isolation in a world of condemnation Fighting alone in a world of her frights But am I alright? It takes me on It breaks me down It fucks me up It turns me down She let's me know, Who I am, And what I am to her