My Broken Krutch

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    nintendo_chica

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    okay, most people would think this was about a significant other, but it's actually about my dad :unsure:

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    your fake smile
    was too misleading,
    your worthless promises
    were too painful.
    and yet you still stride by my side,
    tripping me at every oppertunity.

    you said you'd help me,
    but only moved me farther away.
    you said you'd love me,
    but only broke my heart everyday.
    i don't need you leading me the wrong way.
    i'll be my own krutch.

    everyday, when i wake,
    it's like playing a chess game
    i've already lost;
    each move is useless.
    i tried to go on without you,
    but you persuaded and betrayed me,
    only to scream "Checkmate" in my face.

    i don't need you to bandage my wounds,
    you'll only cause more.
    i don't need you to help me walk,
    for i'll only stumble.
    and you don't need to write my words
    out for me,
    for you'll only make me look like a fool.
     
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    Luke

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    Very emoitional,very good :thumbsup:
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    thanks ^_^
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Yeah I like it too, just like Hellflame Prophecy said: it's very emotional. It's a good poem.
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    thank you :D
     
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    Great Poem! :)
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    thanks! :D

    i was thinking that people might have thought i was too emo, but apparantly i was wrong.
     
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    Evi

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    I think it's good that you write about that stuff.

    It's great
     
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    don't do this

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    ^what the others said


    this is very good ^_^
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    thanks guys :D
     

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