My latest song, "Silently"

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    Dedicated

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    This song's about growing up and moving on and how the everyone around you is doing the same. There's a throwback reference in there to one of my older songs "Little Fishy" which you can also find here, there's a glance at how my girlfriend and I originally got together (I said I'd make her a cosmopolitan on the first night we met) and a nod at my good friends band Seven Years Behind. It's still rough around the edges and I need to mess around with some of the levels in the recording but I'm wanting a few comments about how you think the song's sounding. So please have a listen and give me some feedback, thanks :)

    The song can be found here: THIS IS WHERE THE SONG IS! OMIGOSH!

    And there lyrics are as follows:

    "Silently"

    I want to be successful, only for a fear of shame,
    I graduated and now I'm slowly rotting away,
    Completely un-driven due to how I've seen the world work,
    Unwitting to be someone underneath somebody else,
    Now the girl from Little Fishy doesn't talk to me,
    And my current girlfriend has to pay for everything/And my girlfriend has gone completely crazy,
    Jealous with envy of my friends who put in effort and are deserving,
    Now look who feels Seven Years Behind and still isn't learning.

    Maybe I should just put this all behind me,
    Keep my eyes averted and carry on silently.

    I know I said I'd take you to the cosmos and back,
    But I can't reach the stars myself, so I don't know how I'll get you there as well,
    I'm jealous with envy of my friends who put in effort and are deserving,
    Now look who's Seven Years Behind and still isn't learning.

    Maybe I should just put this all behind me,
    Keep my eyes averted and carry on silently.
     
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    I like it. Its very good

    BTW are you the singer?
     
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    Thanks a lot :) I am indeed the singer yeah, and I did most of the harmonies however a friend of mine that I recorded the track with did some as well :D
     
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    :awesome:

    You've got a good voice BTW. :)
     

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