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    InSidiousGG

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    I was listening the LP My December and start it all..

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    I sink down to the realm of sadness
    Together with the devils and souls unloved
    Never to return

    Never to feel
    Never to be loved

    I tried to climb up to where my friends were;so happy they are over there..
    I call out for my friends
    But
    They forgot me
    They ignored me

    Never to be noticed
    Never had a chance to be part of them

    And Instead of going up
    I sink even deeper
    Together with the devils and souls unloved
    Never to return..
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Simple, but i really like it. This is GREAT. Actually A-M-A-Z-I-N-G (w00t) !
    Where have you been. This great. I am speachless. I love the way it is written. it is great. Keep posting and keep it up. ;)
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    yeah, i have to agree with david on this one! it's really good.

    very simple but that's the greatness of it! :lol:

    well done! have you anymore hiding away?
     
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    InSidiousGG

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    hmm.. I just wrote them.. still needs improvement..
    will check on it later..lol

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    Devils reached upon the stars
    Slayed the angels alive and well
    Getting lost in the thoughts
    Nothing matters now, needing something to set me free
    I picked up my knife with emptiness creeping over me
    Cut myself free let my cold blood free
    Things are not what they used to be
    What I felt was never true
    No options left for me,only the end of me sets me free..

    I know I done all the wrong stuff
    I know I made all problems in the first place
    You guys are not real to me
    I have lost my will to live, with nothing more to give
    Except for the knife that is willing to set me free

    No where to go to with endless thoughts searing the black heart of mine
    No one to talk to with pithole ignorance branding the black soul of mine
    No options left for me,only the end sets me free..
     
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    Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    Its basic but its good,well done :)
     

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