Never Forget

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Please comment. (lol...third poem/lyric in 3 days...wtf!?)

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    Never forget:

    Insincerity,
    the name you carry
    Written on your forehead

    But I forgive you

    Red ink,
    smeared across an empty canvas
    As though it was meant to be

    Can you forgive me?

    And I know the lies you keep behind sealed lips
    and the promises you break

    Keeping the sanctity of our youth,
    for only in those days, did we feel safe

    In the days we remember, when our skin was soft
    and our minds still free

    And we could look beyond the lies,
    forgiving them, as we layed ourselves to sleep

    "I will love you, always"
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Another good piece. Upon clicking this I had thought "man, Chris sure is writing a lot lately!"

    Seems as if you held similar sentiments :).

    Good job
     
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    Red Union

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    Pretty good, You have been writing alot, though that isn't always a bad thing, good stuff.


    Red Union
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    Arlene

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    Wow, I really liked this, a lot. Great job. ^_^
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Thank you all very much :)

    It means a lot to me.
     
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    Jammist

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    I liked this piece quite a bit! :)
     
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    Incze

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    Good stuff man! Keep it up.
     

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