New Found Symmetry

I'm not sure if this is good enough to use it for a song yet, but I'll see what you all think before I decide to discard it or edit it.

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New Found Symmetry

Would it all just be a tribute
To your new found parallels
If you'd pause for just a second
Just to say you're doing well
Have we all made sacrifices
For your new found symmetry
Or that loyal incarnation
That you've tried too hard to be

Are we just so hyperactive
That we need to fill our arms
Do we all just sign the papers
With our reasons to discard
So I curse god damned persistence
I don't want to play this part
Of a life in steady motion
When they flip the wild card

Just wait in line
You can take my place in time
But if you're looking for an answer
Then you'll have to realize
We don't ask why
And we just don't have the time
If you notice any difference
Then you'll have to step aside
We don't ask why

I think we've all just been applying
For a better point of view
Or maybe we're just too dead set on
Waking up to something new
But I hope you're not discouraged
By your disappointed youth
We are just a small reminder
Of the life that you once knew

 

I loved the last verse. Another job well done, Darcy.

 

very nice, the last verse is the best like maranwe said

 

Thanks both of you!

Group hug!

 

*hand reaches a little low* I love group hugs!

 

Joe: Thanks a bunch!

Sickcycle: I'm not exactly sure what you mean about the hand reaching thing,(I'm kinda dense...) but I do agree that group hugs are wonderful!

 

He means that when he was hugging you, his hand "slipped."

 

Oh! Haha, I feel stupid now for not catching on. I guess my mind just isn't dirty enough...

But in that case...my hand just "slipped" and I just happened to slap him in the face...total accident I swear.

 

You can rent my apartment in the gutter

 

You know, that would actually be a really good line in a song.

 

Jes' call me inspiro-girl.

 

brilliant. Fucking. Brilliant.

 

It's a nice piece. I love the title. The verse is great as so many others have said.

 

Thanks muchly!

And thankyou too esaul!