Night of Silence

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    Akidfrompa

    Akidfrompa Well-Known Member

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    Do you like the red sadness?
    Pain means life


    Hold the colors and the frame
    The hand that paints cruelty is always beautiful

    The sun is boarded up
    Flowers reach for light and decay

    Silence tragedy with laughter
    If the cage fits...
    Learn to humble, embody the feeble
    The insect way to live; waiting to be crushed

    The cracked skin drips hope

    Night of silence; carve the memory of life
    Night of frailty; loose hope and slip away

    Cut away the memory;
    Red freedom.

    Amidst the screams hope dangles on broken fingertips

    Night awakens without escape
    And screams echo inside
    No where to run
    Just hope to stay alive

    Night of silence; carve the memory of life
    Night of frailty; loose hope and slip away
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    'The hand that paints cruelty is always beautiful"

    Wow I love that line. Like...so much lol. With TransArchaz (sp?) gone, you might be my favourite writer on the LPA. Great piece.
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    "Amidst the screams hope dangles on broken fingertips"

    This line....crushed me....I love it...
     
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    Luke

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    That was awesome. Keep it up because anything half as good as this is probably worth a read. :)
     
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    Akidfrompa

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    Haha thanks for the feedback, once I get more time I'll be posting more but I'm glad you all liked this one so much.
     

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