No title yet!

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by LP_Freak_2735, May 21, 2005.

  1. #1
    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2004
    Messages:
    110
    Likes Received:
    0



    I really suck at this title thing. Anyone want to help? ;) I was thinking "Prayer" but thats too simple, I guess.
    x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x

    Hey there mister glory,
    I'd like to say a prayer for the girl in the stories,
    and the boy that she left behind.
    The crazy woman in ward forty,
    and the man who drove her out of her mind.
    I'd like to say a prayer,
    a prayer for your people.
    Including the good, bad, the evil.
    I hope that you will hear me,
    my small little cry.
    Don't let me be alone
    Alone again tonight.
     
  2. #2
    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

    Joined:
    Feb 17, 2005
    Messages:
    938
    Likes Received:
    0



    hey, that was really good.

    about the name. if u think prayer sounds to simple how about something like
    "A Simple Prayer"

    Anyway, nice job, keep it up
     
  3. #3
    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2005
    Messages:
    623
    Likes Received:
    0



    "

    yeah, i would have to agree with that.

    good poem!
     
  4. #4
    taylor

    taylor Member

    Joined:
    May 21, 2005
    Messages:
    20
    Likes Received:
    0



    wow, that was really good. i agree it should be called simple prayer. :D
     
  5. #5
    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Oct 13, 2004
    Messages:
    2,190
    Likes Received:
    0



    Awsome job.
     

Share This Page