Out of Order

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    sariia

    sariia Member

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    Out of Order

    1st verse
    Deep words wander in her mind
    thinking of a beautiful suicide
    Lingering endlessly in her soul
    thinking of ending it all

    2nd verse
    Never mind what they say
    They're only pushing her further away
    they don't see her as she is
    They don't understan the life she lives

    3rd verse
    She's carving the words on her wrist feeling better
    she's wiping the blood on the unsent letter
    That's how she lets her emotiones out
    That's how she feels proud

    chours
    Her presense is disturbing
    Her words stopped making sense
    The way she acts makes everyone tense
    She's lacking attention
    She refuses to care
    She beginns to freeze inside
    Still counting on that prayer



    I'm still trying to find a melody to sing it with...But my melodies usually suck.
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

    linkinpark_ben25 In Your Face!

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    wow... continue working on the songs, very good
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    wow this is really good!

    if you find the right melody to go with this it will surely kick some serious ass!

    i love it! :D
     
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    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

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    "Wiping the blood on the unsent letter"

    WOW.
     
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    sariia

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    Oh my God! Thank you so much ^_^
     

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