I wrote this piece a long time ago but wanted to share a recent recording of it https://soundcloud.com/rocky-palos/press-start
Couple thoughts. Liked the lyrics and flow a lot. The problem was the delivery. You should try speaking louder and clearer, and then turn the vocals down in the mix. Add a bit bass to that beat and you could easily mistake it for an OFWGKTA song. That's a compliment btw.