R.A.P (first verse)

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    Dedicated

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    Rub it out, start again, forgot your lines
    All the rhymes you're trying are lyrical crimes
    So get behind bars, they might save your life
    Well, save your tears, put down your knife
    Slitting your emo wrists won't help you out
    You're lines are the type of shit you don't forget about
    Did they fall out your mouth or out of your ass
    You're like my gym teacher; dropping every pass
    You think you're good at it when you get the job
    But then you go home to your mom to sob
    About how no one listens to you or hears your words
    'Cause they're the worst fucking shit, that I ever heard

    *Shrugs* :lol:
     
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    Dusan is my name and rhyming is my game
    Came to take your last wishes and send you away
    Mark has got the point, you shouldn't complain
    Next time watch your mouth or you'll get warned again
    Be a good boy and don't question the rules
    Leave that to the one who like to act like fools
    I came to writers cove, I'll smash down all of you above
    Like I smashed all the streetlights last night when I drove
    I don't feel like rhyming anymore, but I'll be back just like always before
    To show you who's the boss around here, step the fuck back whore

    :lol:

    That was funny
     
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    I remember the thread like this that elie made ages ago. It got locked :lol: Make sure it doesn't go that far again :lol:


    I'm back once again to help you my friends
    'Cause you've all gone out like old fashion trends
    I've got some reject lines that you can lend
    But you'll have to lose the pen and never write again
    Bitch you're just stuck in your fuckin' old fads
    Wearing your shitty shoes with the maxi pads
    I'm laughing at you 'cause your shit's so bad
    But I'm lovin' every minute 'cause mine's so rad
     
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    Ya'll start dissin my style, while running a mile
    Yer Im chasing behind, your running all out of time
    Im coming to thrill, maybe even to kill
    Im not scared of a threat 'cause I'll put you in debt
    My lyrical bombs and musical madness
    Fill you all with depression and miserable sadness
    So start poppin ya pills and stop dissin my skills
    While I stand in the background countin up all ya bills
     
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    I am coming out of retirement
    About to do something you haven't
    Go down to Texas and fix up that dissatric traffic
    I am Coming down from my Tower above
    I got the power that showers over my lungs
    Spilling out never ending lyrics of chilling
    I sent you the bill for when left to Tusan
    Hit the Bong and came back like King Kong
    I got Peter Jackson liking my songs
    Cheech and Chong hitting the gonj, got me feeling like nothing is wrong
    So now I am back with a jack
    Spread my cards over the table, because this is a New Label
     
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    I'm rappin' here with a smille on my face
    Rappin' to please ya and all human race
    My trash talk means nothing,dont take it personally
    Don't act like some kiddy in a smalltime nursery
    Rap should be good and fun,try and enjoy it
    Just cause your not that good,dont decoy it
    Write your lines from the heart
    Then use rhymes to rip them apart
     
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    Arhaz

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    dude, we know what rap's all about,
    someone ought to tell you that and throw you out.
    wipe that nasty smile off you face,
    this is a warning before you're replaced.
     
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    writin' short shit still freakolp
    How about longer or clever and free?
    you write it well,but dont deliver it
    My smiles stayin' where i put it
    I write bigger and better than you
    Nothing monotinous but you have no clue
     
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    it's "monotonous", see that first,
    everything you write seems so rehearsed,
    and long just shows the number of words you need,
    to try and kick butt, but you're very weak.
     
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    You now write it short
    Cause writin' long you would get caught
    You're out of shit to write about
    Thats where you stand and i shout it out
    Im fed up o' you and your crappy rhymes
    These might be my last few lines
     
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    Write it short from the heart
    So you wouldn't get hurt
    Everything is burning up inside
    Trying to burn off the dirt
    I take off my shirt sweating up a storm
    Catching my breath running through the dorms
    You guys are worms coming after the best
    Wanting to contest with me, but you're in descent
    Immense propaganda flowing from these lips
    Making you all trip cause you're feeling tipsy
    All you wanabees can do is lipsink
    So bring it to me one last time while I grab a dime

    B)
     
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    Look, you can't control the shit that I fling
    I'll smack you up, bag you up, rule you like a king
    Beat your shitty rhymes with a major league swing
    I'll have you kneeling below me; kissing my ring
    'Cause I'm owning you like Cheerios
    The whole grain breakfast cereal
    Spittin' you out like Imperial
    Your rhymes are immaterial
    So stop throwin' your rhymes to me
    "Ohh, look what I can be!"
    You ain't no fuckin' emcee
    Best hold onto your shit rhyme guarantee
     
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    Being a Fort Minor producer should of taught you I’d shoot you
    I thought you knew what was good music, but you blew it trying to contribute
    Trying to gun me down with everyone around
    Kiss my feat to the mother-fucking beat
    Pawn off your ring so you can get some cheese
    To rethink what life means you have to bring it
    I am tearing it up just to share it
    Living life up to the fullest
    I got everyone else shouting courage’s lyrics
    You bring your greatest hits to the party, but they’re shoty
    No one wants to hear it when drinking Bacardi
    You’re not even emcee related
    You’re tardy to class because your Jaded
    Everyone knows that you’re faded
    Schoolboy you missed when we debated
    We stated that you needed to be re educated
    I dedicate this rhyme to the Dedicated
     
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    Heshboy, you're outta ya mind
    I'm throwing lines so bright that they'll make you blind
    Helpin' you out, givin' a hand, and what not
    Now I'm gettin' bored of my fake fuckin' props
    And the glare of the flare that'll be on eyelids
    Will remind you of what your lyrical crimes did
    But don't rub your eyes it'll fuckin' burn, kid
    You might lose your vision, god forbid
    Bacardi is a losers drink
    The drink you drink before head over the sink
    Spat it back out before you could blink
    Educating yourself not to think
    And talking of education
    Tune back into your radio station
    Think you're learning shit with the rest of the nation
    But for your rhymes you need to learn self-application
     
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    Still trying to bring your shit to the Ocs greatest
    I know it because it’s so bad I can taste it
    You misplaced your way to the exit
    I am the best president in the nation since Richard Nixon
    Your words are coming out as bricks
    They should swish where mine hit
    I’ll let you pick where to sit on the bench
    You should try to a get clique in my top branches
    Step off your ranch so you can steal my stances
    These times are getting elastic
    Now you can’t even choke a bitch with plastic, you’re collapsing
    My shits got you fainting, and everyone else feeling fantastic
    I got that number 4 flow, I am no average Joe
    I gave you a Ho who gave you the cold shoulder, and told you that you’re rhymes are to slow to bone her
     

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