Shadow Of A Doubt

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    Derek

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    Shadow Of A Doubt
    By Derek Oswald

    Swallow these pills and end it all in a blur,
    Do it quick enough so hesitance wont occur,
    Feel your body rotting deep down inside,
    Shut everything down with a bottle of cyanide,
    Choke down inside from your gut to your throat,
    Because nobody can help you its only you on this boat,
    Singing tearful songs that nobody can hear,
    To offer anything to even silence your fear,
    The voices become louder and your end's drawing near,
    Too late to go back now, your mere existence disappears,
    Your heart becomes heavy and your mind becomes numb,
    This to everyone who ever thought you were dumb,
    Nothing can stop this, the hope is slowly falling out,
    Too bad nobody stopped you, you were just a shadow of a doubt
     
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    th3ch3m1st

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    Dude.. that's deep. That's...good. I'll comment again when I know what to say. Not to sound rude, but i didnt know you were capable of something that meaningful, Derek :p
     
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    Andrea

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    Wow. That was sad. :( Very well written though. ;)
     
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    Despite the circumstances, awesome poem. :)
     
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    Derek

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    You'd be surprized. Go around and check out all my poems or songs here, some angry/deep stuff.
     
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    th3ch3m1st

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    Whole different view when you hear that side. You guys are major talented.
     
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    i love it :)
     

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