Soul

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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    I imagine this song, being sung along with a rock band.

    He was young,
    He was innocent,
    But death did not spare him,

    (Chorus)
    Deliver him from hell,
    Help him get his way,
    Let him live his life,
    Aswell as his hopes and dreams,

    He had a chance,
    To make a difference,
    But instead you took his soul,

    Were you jealous,
    Or did it just kill you inside,
    To see him happy for once,

    (Chorus)
    Deliver him from hell,
    Help him get his way,
    Let him live his life,
    Aswell as his hopes and dreams,

    You had to ruin everything,
    Well i'm letting this out
    (there will be a moment of silence here)
    I hate you
    I hate you
    I hate you
    I don't wana here it
    (hears sorrows)
    (music goes on for a while then it ends with the drum)

    R&R
    thx
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Doing good. You're improving greatly in a short space of time :p. I really like your poems, the others weren't freaky, just misunderstood.
     
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    fallenangel

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    this is a good simple song. i like it. you don't always need big explainations to express an emotion. good job! ;)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice work, not amazing but songs arn't always that complex so this doesn't need to be though it often makes it less attractive to the user, keep up the good work, your getting better all the time.
     

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