The Lyrics

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    Zakrisk

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    These are the lyrics to a song I'm working on. It's really personal for me, and any feedback would be greatly appreciated. :)


    These are the lyrics
    This song has lyrics
    Lyrics are in this song
    Hey, man, you hear it?
    All of these lyrics?
    Lyrics are in this song.

    This song has lyrics.
    Lyrics are here.
    Words will float inside and out of your ears.
    La di dee da da
    La di dee doo dum
    Dun di dee dum daaaaa.
     
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    Speed Freak

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    That is very interesting.
     
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    Zakrisk

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    Thank you so much. It's probably the most personal piece that I have written.. Last month was a really hard month for me. My mom got really sick and I went to help her out, but she kept getting worse and ended up having a really bad nervous breakdown, where she nearly killed herself. I had to keep her under control until the police arrived. So that's where this piece came from and I'm really glad you got at least something out of it. :) If only it made you think a little bit.
     
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    Will

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    Wow...
     
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    Zakrisk

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    I know.. it has been madness.
     
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    I don't really like it. Nothing personal, I think it's trying to be funny but I don't see it. Sorry.
     
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    Zakrisk

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    Read about four posts above me.. I explained it.
     

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