Wrote a couple new ones, poems, mind, I'm looking for truths and not just "yeah it's good"'s: "Cut Myself Deeper" While the pain is hell, I'll cut myself deeper And while my blood is cheaper I'll cut myself deeper While everyone's sleeping My blood will be seeping When cold winds blow My blood shall flow As the cold, hard metal Cut's my skin My blood will flow and cleanse my sin As the pain get's worse I'll finish it And they can carry me off In a ####### hearse. "Your Haunting Eyes" Your eyes, I saw On someone's face And right there I knew That it wasn't you But I couldn't think I froze at the thought Of the memory of you I couldn't stop staring I couldn't look away I didn't want to lose you again Like I did yesterday It wasn't you I knew it to be true Now I know what I have to do I have to continue living And breathing on cue. --------------- The top one was written from more of a third person view, but the bottom really happened. And really sucked. Really, really sucked.
You take offense from a compliment? I said awesome because it was so good. Kinda short, but good, nonetheless.