Here's to a bitter taste of emptiness The desolation shared by your kiss The lies that bled from your lips And the promises that spilt from your hips To all of the confusion you caused To each and every one of your flaws All that I had thought about us And all the words that you shushed You have nowhere to run This is the end to your fun Now you will pay for all that you've done Oh, I hope you feel the sting You've gone and destroyed everything Oh, I hope you feel the sting The time has come to clip your wings Held in the embrace of loneliness Here's your last look at all that you'll miss Do you think you'll regret your choice? This is the last time that you'll hear my voice Will you find love in all your priorities While being abandoned by all your authorities? Will you gather up all that you have left? The cumulation of your sex, tears, and theft The broken screams of despair Is it too much to bear? To realize there is no one left who will care Oh, I hope you feel the sting You've gone and destroyed everything Oh, I hope you feel the sting The time has come to clip your wings You're the black rose on the floor The love of a whore Left to lie here immobile and sore This is your grave And here I will wave Goodbye to the hopes that you can be saved I'll disappear Cherish your tears Stare at yourself alone in your mirror Here you will rot The lesson is taught Left to rest with all that has been forgot Oh, I hope you feel the sting You've gone and destroyed everything Oh, I hope you feel the sting The time has come to clip your wings Oh, I hope you feel the sting You've gone and destroyed everything Oh, I hope you feel the sting You will scream as I sing
Nice lyrics. (I assume that's what this is.) I enjoyed it overall, but get the feeling that some rhymes were somewhat lacking. They just seemed to disturb the flow, to me. But as always, I liked your choice of words and images overall. (Especially loved the bits you kept repeating)
Wow, didn't notice your comment! Yeah, I was writing quickly, so I let some of the rhymes get forced and the line lengths disrupt the flow. I was really just ticked and wanted to write SOMETHING. Thanks a lot for the comment!