THE WRONG TIME (New original song)

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    LeonCox93

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    I'm not the greatest singer in the world, but I made a song. Hope you like it, but don't mind criticism either way :) Cheers



    I felt nothing but the cold in my hands
    I didn't want to sleep just to stand again
    and after this I'm done
    I told myself yeah after this I'm done
    I didn't know you were here right now
    if I did I would've told you how
    I'm feeling on my own
    how I'm feeling on my own

    we've all had it rough
    as if it ain't hard enough
    we all fall in love
    at the wrong time

    it makes me question every single
    human heart that's beating
    I know it's not that good of me
    to tell you how I feel
    this isn't what you wanna' hear right now
    but I think we should settle down
    live with this crack in the center
    let's be cheerless together

    we've all had it rough (we've all had it rough)
    as if it ain't hard enough
    we all fall in love (we all fall in love)
    at the wrong time
    it doesn't matter what we've done (what we've done)
    it matters what we're gonna do
    we all fall in love (we all fall in love)
    at the wrong time

    (we all fall in love)
    (we all fall in love)

    we've all had it rough (we've all had it rough)
    as if it ain't hard enough
    we all fall in love (we all fall in love)
    at the wrong time
    it doesn't matter what we've done (what we've done)
    it matters what we're gonna do
    we all fall in love (we all fall in love)
    at the wrong time
     
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    Michele

    Michele Praise Brad Delson, our Lord and Savior. LPA Addict

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    Great job dude, that was awesome. :)
     
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    LeonCox93

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    Thank you!!
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    I can really hear the potential here. I think you've especially done an okay job with the writing - the song at the core clicks with me. :)

    Would you mind sending me the vocal layers? I'm interested in trying some things
     
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    LeonCox93

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    Cheers man! Yeah ofcourse I will. Give me a day or two until I'm back on the PC to send you it :)
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    But he did not send it.
     

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