This Wild Dance

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    Alacrity

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    (Run)
    Wild we run through this night
    Our hearts are racing
    Close to the same pace
    I can feel you beside me
    We're running from the pain
    (you have me)
    We're running from these prototypes
    (i'm yours)
    We're running from the past
    And I'm with you

    I don't care where we go
    I'm in your arms
    This is where I belong
    (i belong here)

    So what are we waiting for?
    Let's start this tonight
    We'll bust this place and leave only our names
    They'll know us by the flickering lights
    We'll make it
    How much more free can we get?

    Can this last for one more night?
    (You say )
    "We can't run forever"
    (I say)
    "...maybe we can"
    While we're here
    I'm alive
    We're alive
    (how much more free can we get?)

    I don't care where we go
    I'm in your arms
    This is where I belong
    (i belong here)

    So what are we waiting for?
    Let's start this tonight
    We'll bust this place and leave only our names
    They'll know us by the flickering lights
    We'll make it
    How much more free can we get?

    This is our chance
    Are we going to let it pass us by?
    This is what we've waited for
    We're unstoppable
    (Let's go)

    We're not waiting anymore
    We started it tonight
    Left this place with just our names
    (we're as free as we can get)
    This time we'll make it
    I'll swear this to you
    This wild dance
    (we're as free as we can get)




    o.o... this started out as a poem... and then when i was about to post it it turned into this song.. uhm, wow. okay. the stuff in the parenthesis would be screaming.. and then the rest of it is singing. I wrote it tonight around 10, and i'd appreciate any comments or critisism. no help with this one, eep. well uh, yeah! <333
     
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    Will

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    That's actually really good. I can see underOATH performing that song.
     
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    Alacrity

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    Wow, considering they're one of my favorite bands, that's a big compliment. Thanks, Will.
     
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    great work, keep it up :)
     
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    Alacrity

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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