Lock lips with the enemy now Why don't you? Or are you afraid of finding out The real truth behind the mask. Loose lips never sink ships Only sink desperate cries for attention Out of the desolate society you're born from So go fuck somebody for affection. These days aren't the same These times aren't the ways Everything's different now. The only time is now though Feel good Feel proud This is my uncultured society.
That was weird The comment, that is. I like this short and abstract to the point of being sharp new style of yours.
I would have preferred to have, at least, another stanza in it. Besides that though, I though it was really well done, loved your topic as well. 7.5/10