Unleash

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    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

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    OKay, I wrote this a while ago and I'm working on editing it and making it better, and I don't know about the title, what do you think?


    Unleash

    Tell me everything sweet child,
    Don't be afraid not to smile.
    Tell me everything you feel.
    How you're not sure what is real.
    You know I'd run a million miles,
    Just to make sure that you're alright.
    You know I can't resist you.
    Your champion heart,
    The way you're so smart.
    I just can't turn away,
    When you're smiling at me,
    Show me you what you hide,
    Show me what could be mine.
     
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    Testament

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    That's pretty good. I like it.
     

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