Unnamed Pain

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    MaDd BoKo 03

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    Hey guys here is one of my songs...im having trouble with a second verse

    Unnamed pain it won't go away/ deep inside i feel it reside/ I can't stand on my two feet/ the pain inside will be beat/ My pride is drawn and my life is gone/ the hurt inside i try to hide/ need somewhere where i can be/ theres nothing inside i wouldn't deny/ all my thoughts do not fit/ but my jealousy won't let me quit/

    And I knew it was me....
    And I knew it could be....
    All the pain that's inside of me
    Thoughts of ending and leaving my life
    Killing my pain with this knife
    But nothing's still there...
    Nothing is there
     
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    Methybrea

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    You are saying that nothing is there... You could talk about how you are affected by the nothingness inside of you. Maybe you could say that you need to feel pain...Think about it, but you should go by how you feel about it! B)
     

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