Writing: Untitled

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Jayhov, May 9, 2014.

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    Jayhov

    Jayhov Well-Known Member

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    Alive.

    Till death do us part: a phrase that lacks meaning
    Now and forever perpetually fleeting
    Remember the day where you left me bleeding?

    Unable to endure I anticipate collapse
    Prompted by the safeguard that the human heart lacks
    Must one single moment reduce it all to glass?

    I long for the day of self-perseverance
    To cease the decay that remains in existence
    The only answer left is in my own disappearance

    Gone.
     
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    Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Not bad!

    Personally, I'd to inject a bit more meter but the theme is pretty good.
     

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