Music Unwanted Gift

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    Black-Striped Prism

    Black-Striped Prism Re-Converge is now on YouTube

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    Black-Striped Prism's second single from the upcoming album is here! By no mistake is it being premiered on Christmas Eve. The song title is "Unwanted Gift", which fits perfectly for this time of the year. There are many people out there who not only take material possessions for granted, but also people. Take a moment to think about who you may take for granted, or who does a lot for you. Then take another moment to contact them and let them know you appreciate them, or maybe return the favor and give them the same treatment they give you. The people that smile the most, may also be the people who are silently suffering the most. The people who give the most, may be the ones who need to receive appreciation and attention the most. And the people who are always there for you, are the ones who need you the most to be there for them. Now enjoy listening to Unwanted Gift. And if you haven't liked the page already, like it here at www.facebook.com/BlackStripedPrism

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUDpfVvhYwM
     
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    Black-Striped Prism

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    Please everyone give the single a chance. Black-Striped Prism is putting alot of effort into making this an extraordinary album that should contain songs for everybody to like. No matter what genre(s) you're into, at least one song on the upcoming album should be to your liking. Plus the lyrics are about real situations, and real feelings. So if nothing else, the lyrics should be relatable to most to all of the listeners throughout the album.
     
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    Susy

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    I'm gonna be honest here.

    Lyrics were somewhat good, concept is good, but some of those lines (especially the ending) are cringeworthy and just shouldn't be there. Rapping doesn't really sound that good, while the girl singing at the end was pretty damn good, it fit with the instrumental a lot, lot more. If the entire song was sung, it would've been much better. Drums needed to be punchier, and overall the song should be a little... louder.

    And that's just not attention grabbing artwork, something that is very important if you're promoting yourself through YouTube.
     

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