Waiting For Tomorrow

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    Scarlet

    Scarlet Well-Known Member

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    (I made this poem about a year ago. It isn't that great but I'd like your comments.)

    Waiting For Tomorrow

    Tomorrow will be another day filled with the things I hate.
    Another day of this suffering that I can’t seem to break.

    Tomorrows just another day for me to be ignored.
    Tomorrows just another day, nothing to look forward.

    So then, why do I long for tomorrow to come?
    I’m so confused, I’m feeling numb.

    Waiting for tomorrow, maybe things will change.
    Waiting for tomorrow, it will stop this pain.

    This pain, this pain, Oh how I long
    For someone to comfort me, tell me to hold on.

    I’m waiting for tomorrow, starting to give up.
    Waiting for tomorrow, this pain is just too much.
     
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    Jamie

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    Thats rather cool :)
     
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    Madi

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    I like it!
     
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    RememberingNever

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    Great poem.. I really liked it. ;)

    My favorite part:

    Tomorrow will be another day filled with the things I hate.
    Another day of this suffering that I can’t seem to break.
     
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    don't do this

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    great work
    I really like it :)
     
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    Scarlet

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    Thanks guys. :)
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Simple, but veeeeery nice ;)
     

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