[Verse] Feel the hate beneath the flesh Hear the pain crawl through my chest Cry out in agony my name Slowly rotting inside my heart Feeling cursed with nowhere to run Show me the knife edge Take it to my skin Penatrate me from within [Chorus] Leave me alone Walk away from my tortured soul I can't take the preassure I can't take this shit no more [Verse] Don't hold your breath Seething agony grips your face And I can't kill demons Should have killed their creators Turn my insides black with hate Nothing has a deep meaning Turn my pain into lust Show me the blades edge Take it to my veins Penetrate me from within [Chorus] Leave me alone Walk away from my tortured soul I can't take the preassure I can't take this shit no more [Guitar Breakdown] [Chorus]
It sounds good. I wanna here the song with like the band and all. Is it like a hard rock song, or is it kinda slow?
Your last couple of songs/poems have been pretty good, but this one is much better, i really like it. Sounds good. Keep it up. B)
www.myspace.com/yourcatastrophe has the main riff on, it also has a couple of others that I'm not sure about.
sorry,but i didnt like this very much i felt the song didnt flow that well ,the beggining was ok,but it got worse. sorry about that,not my cup of tea