Wasting Time and Tempting Fate

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    Alacrity

    Alacrity don't stop talking to me; i haven't been listening LPA Super Member

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    So, what do we call this?
    We're standing on the line between the armies of love and hate
    Wasting time and losing our lives by the moment
    Tempting fate as it watches us laying here, idle
    I'm fading away...
    Or is it you?
    It seems I'm losing sight of everything I once had in mind
    Maybe it's me changing, but i'm new to this
    I'm not asking for you to make my choices for me
    ...but maybe, could you could help?
    I... I just want someone so bad
    And if you could be that someone
    That I could turn to
    You'd be my hero... I don't think you really know
    So, what are we going to call this now?
    I'm just waiting on a sign from you


    any comments or suggestions to make it better?

    edit:// just fixed the second line a little.
     
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    Adam

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    Pretty good :)
     
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    Alacrity

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    Thank you ^_^
     
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    Leslie

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    Great job! ^_^
     
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    Alacrity

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    Thanks, Leslie :)
     
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    Nice Job :thumbsup:
     
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    Very nice, Fiona...keep 'em comin! :D
     
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    Alacrity

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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