Wonderful Winter.

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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    Wrote it a while ago. I hope you enjoy!


    Wonderful Winter.

    Red skies, passing by black clouds.
    The unmoving tree, the hallowed car shell.
    A dead heartbeat in time.

    Calm flakes fall from the sky.
    Driftly, calmly, swaying.
    Ashes to ashes.

    Children preparing for playtime, dress up.
    Rushing for the door slowly, an ember glow of red.
    Lifeless birds lay decaying, scattered.

    Quitely and smoothly the air stirs.

    Wild and fun games, Child's play.
    Spinning and spinning,
    A climatic group.

    Jumping for joy, It is the season
    Falling from a hug, shocked...
    Innocent.

    Looking back up at the crowd.
    The child takes a last look.
    And closes the eyes.​
     
    Last edited: Jul 7, 2009
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    Jesse

    Jesse Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I like it. It's seems innocent and kind of dark at the same time. So it gives it a nice contrast. But I think you should maybe fix your centers. :p
     

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