Wrote it a while ago. I hope you enjoy! Wonderful Winter. Red skies, passing by black clouds. The unmoving tree, the hallowed car shell. A dead heartbeat in time. Calm flakes fall from the sky. Driftly, calmly, swaying. Ashes to ashes. Children preparing for playtime, dress up. Rushing for the door slowly, an ember glow of red. Lifeless birds lay decaying, scattered. Quitely and smoothly the air stirs. Wild and fun games, Child's play. Spinning and spinning, A climatic group. Jumping for joy, It is the season Falling from a hug, shocked... Innocent. Looking back up at the crowd. The child takes a last look. And closes the eyes.
I like it. It's seems innocent and kind of dark at the same time. So it gives it a nice contrast. But I think you should maybe fix your centers.