Music "Your Action is Here" (Original song)

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    Sasuke

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    Elaine

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    The mids on the bass are super high in a very distracting way. The mixing in general feels like it needs work and the composition feels a bit like an incoherent mess in places. Keep at it, though. Everybody starts somewhere. :)
     
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    minuteforce

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    One of the problems I notice is that, in my opinion, the notes that your sub is playing are at least an octave too low. Moving those up would be one step you can take to make the mix sound less muddy (or however you'd phrase it)
     
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    Sasuke

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    The mixing isn't really my thing, I HATE IT SO MUCH :timothy:
    So what are you guys think is the btter place for mixing, I have both FL Studio & Audition. or maybe I must get better one?

    And for my defend, the fucking soundcloud uploader screw it a lot too :p
     
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    minuteforce

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    Oh, everyone does. :)
     
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