94 (Demo)

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    Dedicated

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    Dedicated, Oct 19, 2010



    http://soundcloud.com/silence-your-critics/94-acoustic-demo

    Have a listen please guys and let me know what you think of this new song. Even if it's just to say how weird my normal speaking voice is...

    "94"

    You have a heart made of gold and a chest made of kevlar,
    Making it hard to achieve the goal that men have been slain for,
    Drawn towards your pencil weilding fingers that bear no ring,
    Instilled with rage that lay out her feelings intricately,
    With nails made of acrylic and immaculate dress sense,
    Forcing out her hidden feelings on to paper through the lead,
    With radiating eyes that are encompassing at least,
    She's as close to a Queen Of Hearts as a girl could ever be.

    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    She's only as perfect as you think she is,
    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    This could all blossom with the meeting of lips.

    You see the gaze that's in her eyes,
    That cheeky smile as I touch her side,
    The second gap as our eyes meet,
    Really does mean something...

    To say that I smell of your perfume would be cliche, yet so true,
    Like the meeting of lips as lovers kiss, yeah the meeting of lips as lovers kiss,
    Dreams that slide off as easy as her nightdress,
    (Slides down her legs while I fall for her)
    This is too much to take as those dreams turn into nightmares.

    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    She's only as perfect as you think she is,
    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    This could all blossom with the meeting of lips.

    You have a heart made of gold, and a chest made of kevlar.

    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    She's only as perfect as you think she is,
    So come on, come on, kiss her, kiss her,
    This could all blossom with the meeting of lips.
     
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    travz21

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    travz21, Oct 19, 2010



    Good stuff. I don't get how people sing without their accents, though.
     
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    MaiMeR

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    MaiMeR, Oct 23, 2010



    nice vocals man, im really impressed!
     
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    Luke

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    Luke, Oct 27, 2010



    Nice work Dave. Your vocals have really improved over the years. Keep it up, mate. :)
     
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    Dedicated

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    Cheers Luke and everyone else (sorry I don't know your real names >_< ), I really appreciate it :)

    Spread the word to all your friends if you can ever be bothered to :lol:

    I need to start promoting my Facebook page too actually XD
     
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    28thART

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    28thART, Oct 27, 2010



    i like your voice, with a little bit of work you may be someone famous, who knows. we may ask your sig :D !
    keep it up man ;) , and good luck.
     

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