Alone Again

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    esaul17

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    I now know your name
    The right moves to make
    I see what you want
    See what to fake
    All that you have
    All I can take
    You'd love to let me

    But each word you speak
    Pulls me away
    It's not your fault
    What can I say?
    I see who you are
    My feelings decay
    Can you see I'm empty?

    And I trip on my own retreat
    But if you get me back up on my feet
    I'll just run away again

    See what this is?
    I'm not into you
    It's all that you are
    All that you do
    I'm sure that you'd leave
    If only you knew
    If only you listened

    Just a concept
    All that you are
    So I'm not alone
    You'll heal my scars
    Sleep in my arms
    Behind these bars
    Oh, did I trap you?

    It's your turn to get up and leave
    You deserve more than you believe
    You can leave me alone again
    Just stay at home again
    Don't pick up the phone again
    Yeah
    You can leave me alone again
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    Depressing...but well written. Is this based off of something that happened or just random inspiration?
     
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    esaul17

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    It is inspired by something moreso than based on it. It is more like, one possible outcome a situation could unfold into.

    Thanks for reading it Arlene :).
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    Ah, I understand that. I've kinda written stories in my head when I wasn't sure how a situation would unfold, so I definitely know where you're coming from.

    And your welcome, I enjoyed it. :)
     
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    Jesse

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    I agree that this is Really GOOD
     
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    esaul17

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    Thanks a lot :).
     

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