First Lyrics/Poem

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    Madi

    Madi Well-Known Member

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    BLACK MEMORIES

    Why did you paint my memories black?
    And drip blood stains on them
    Why did you cry upon them?
    The story’s smudged

    You smashed the glass in your hand
    And sprinkled the shards upon me
    Cutting into my skin
    Re-opening old wounds
    I didn’t realize I had
    And creating new scars

    There must’ve been something else
    That pushed you over the edge
    (At least I like to think so)

    This bitterness consuming
    Sadness suffocating
    Memories rusting in the rain

    Like? Hate? Suggestions?
     
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    Adam

    Adam !!!! LPA Super Member

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    I like it.
    good work ^_^
     
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    Jennster

    Jennster "That's hot."

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    I like it too!

    Keep up the good work!
     
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    Madi

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    Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.
     

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