Hey, I would like to show you my latest lyrics. It would be very cool to receive some comments and criticism since I am not a native speaker of English. What is it about? The text is about the lyrical I that has feelings for a person who only uses it to have advantages. E. g. the person is already in a relationship but pretends to love the lyrical I as well to benefit from closeness when being alone. With this song, the lyrical I breaks away from all the pain and attempts to move on. I knew you could never love me ------------------------------------ ------------------------------------ Verse I: -------- Always when you're much-hated You can find me as your relief Said you're in between the chairs To confine me to you Now, with every step I savor Daggers gore my trustful heart Your deception, I never confessed It'd make me comfortable Chorus: ------- I will never believe in your promise (again) I will never become what I used to be I can never accept that you could Never love me, but practised upon me Verse II: --------- And there she's dreaming in my bed While her haze drips into my lungs Like a white rose fragile She's looking so innocent Yet the sight is deceitful Her closeness arouse new hope I am still your favorite game But I can't stand your rules Chorus: ------- I will never believe in your promise (again) I will never become what I used to be I can never accept that you could Never love me, but practised upon me I will never rive my heart (again) I will never bear the guilt for you And I will be long gone when The sun awakes for another tomorrow Outro: ------ I knew you could never love me But be sure I could never live with you