latest rap - wot u think

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    [chali]

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    my latest:

    what you think?

    high lyrical euphoria in a perfect rapture
    smashing your head to the curb it's you who i wanna capture
    i kick #### on you like hwoarang in tekken 4
    destroying your rhyme main central core
    saying the same old same line feeling so concieted
    showing no creativity what so ever
    your the one who's cheated
    chocking you with a metaphorical line making sure your defeated
    my rhyme atomic mass is 221.7
    heavier than pertrolium gas your's below 0.11
    as my lines are strongly magnetic so powerfully energetic
    creating a force so strong as i become telekinetic
    listening carefully to your lines as they are dirty as masturbation
    i will stop your dirty act by my rap adminstration
    injuring you in this battle with my violent rhyme agitaion
    dropping dead down by this mean personification
    dissing people in rap with guns as it's your main criteria
    spreading it like bacteria all over syria making them feel this hysteria
    i will hit back at you with a line that will give your uncontrollable fear
    making you afraid of the teletubbies as you've wrecked your rap career
    yay the illegitimate offspring of unmarried parents is gone they all begin to cheer
    feeling pain from my lines as you begin to fall
    your so dumb you stuck a phone up your ass and thought you made a booty call
    waving my rhyme magic wand as my powers are demonic
    wounding your rap mind as you new every line
    whoa you look 'bad ass' how ironic
    i just made you chronically psychotic
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_

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    heya.. well.. i read ur rhyme and i think its really really good. straight up.. not lyin.. i noe a few frenz who make rhymes too.. and yar.. ur ones pretty good.. keep it up!! peace and dust..^_^
     
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    [chali]

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    thanks!

    I will create rhyme atomic bombs causing a disaster in this arena
    damaging your rap mind like Nagasaki and Hiroshima
    as I just made your lines look ugly and sick like christina
    i think of original personified lines that are dressed to the nines
    creating a feeling that is euphoric
    radiation from my protonic rhymes just gave you a plague that is bubonic
    going to the doctor taking the daily antibiotic
    as i have given you a rap disease that is 100% chronic
    here's an enlightening glimpse of my lines in action
    screws tightening around you as it's a dangerous nuclear reaction
    increasing the rate of flow giving you mass x-ray diffraction
    making you feel ill as you begin to malfunction
    as a tumor grows in your brain feeling horrific pain
    what the hell is wrong with you, i think your going insane"
    getting bigger and bigger as it develops to cancer
    you were a wicked emcee, what's wrong? your demanding for an answer
    as i have completed my mission with great facility
    i've increased your chance to loose a battle with a high vulnerability
    shattering your rap career as i have giving you rhyme disability
    ending this rap as i begin to anticipate
    that you've lost to this battle as you discontinue to participate
     
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    Andrea

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    Very good! :)
     

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