Writing: Michele's writing

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    Michele

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    Just visit a poetry contest from a friend today, brought me to some ideas of writting. Maybe my style (and grammatical writting) isnt the best, i hope you enjoy it.
    Here is my first and darker one (nothing personal, just some thoughts i had)

    Broken Dreams

    Hope, a shining light in a dark night
    Destroyed by the whole society without a soul
    Little pieces here and there
    lost in the senseless of living

    Dreams as the last way to save them,
    broken down by the reallity
    Family? Unimportant.
    Friends? Gone!

    Its a dark life in the world
    Far Outside from home
    Nothing to save us
    Religion? No Need to believe,
    The Dreams Are Broken.

    We are lost, beaten by the ones
    we never wanted to be.
    There was too much change,
    more than we recognise.

    Now, we have become
    empty covers of soulless things
    The dreams are broken.

    Conversations about things
    we dont care, with our darkest enemys.
    Feelings? Not sure.
    Hope? Killed.

    Returning to a better Life
    with emotions? Low chances
    We are robots, working
    in a world of sorrow and killing.

    No dreams or broken dreams,
    whatever.
    Without dreams, Life is
    damned by the darkness.
     
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    Dragondust

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    Nice Michele!
     
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    Very well done sir!
     
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    Michele

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    Thanks :)

    I think , i needed something creativ so i just started this.
     
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    Pretty good! :)
     
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    Wow, pretty deep, Michele.


    Nice.
     
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    Michele

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    Thanks, i try to move on here in some days, but at first i have to collect some thoughts.

    (Here for example, a part came when i was in the train)
     
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    :chuck:
     
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    Michele

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    Some happier one, some thoughts about the nature. Hope you like it.

    The Cylcle Repeated

    The earth is breathing
    Calm after a heavy storm
    Empty blown and flat
    Ready to rise something new

    Flowers starts to grow
    while trees are giving some life
    Rivers begin to flow through the land
    And the nature starts to show

    Singing birds in the trees
    covered by leaves and branches
    the world is mellow and happy
    the nature is safety and clean

    The sea is clean and calm
    with swimming fishes in it
    the beach is filled with sand
    land and coast are one

    But then a little breeze moves on
    The air begins to flow
    Build up to a heavy storm
    To move water, plants and stones

    The cycle repeated
    while the storm washed it all away
    allows the nature to start over
    and left the earth empty again

    Reborn by the heavy breeze
    the world starts to evolve
    to become biggger and better
    with little mistakes which will repeat

    This is the cycle of life
    things will come and things will go
    but whatever also will happen
    the nature will always grow
     
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    Michele

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    Revolution Now

    Empty Streets, Controlled
    By the government.
    Fear in the hearts,
    but hope somewhere out there.

    Low chances to win,
    a bigger chance to lose.
    But you need to try,
    to prevent the chaos.

    Single words are weak,
    but together they build a storm of fire,
    attacking the evil heart of poison,
    the government, who wants to controll us.

    The greed of the government, the
    suffering of the people, we
    need to defend our pride, and let
    them blow up.

    Everyone, rise your voice,
    its time for change,
    for a better world
    The revolution starts now.
     
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    Michele

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    Timebomb

    Its weird, i like you
    i really do, but
    i dont know how to act
    how to be for you.

    I can see that you like,
    yeah you really like me.
    But somehow i act, like
    i dont want to act.

    Where the hell is my problem,
    i feel you are like a timebomb.
    I dont know how to act,
    to cut a cable, the green, the blue or the red?

    If i make a mistake,
    i am sure the situation will explode,
    like a timebomb, which
    i have to defuse.

    So i am acting like i did before,
    the time will tick away,
    and at the end of the day
    the situation will explode or defuse.

    So you are here, my timebomb.
    My acting will decide our future.
    How to react to this? I dont know.
    Detonation, hopefully you will never show.
     
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    polleo

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    I really like timebomb, Michele. It simple but elegant. I mean, its honest and at the same time, brings across the emotions if that doesn't sound stupid ha. Nice.
     
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    Michele

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    Thanks Sujana, thats the most personal one so far, describes the situation i am currently in.
     
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    Buried alive

    Buried alive
    Nobody hear me
    The air disappears slowly
    I am sinking into death

    Last thoughts of my life
    Dark and dusty, bright and clear
    Whatever i did or i tried
    it was the way i choosed

    The moments of my life
    i can see them right now
    in front of my inner eye
    From the birth to the coming death

    Was this all worthy?
    Yes, it was. As long as you
    believe in your actions
    Nobody should stop you

    My family, my freinds
    All of them made my life
    what it was. Brilliant and sad
    The death is everywhere

    There isnt air here anymote
    noone who could save me, but atleast
    my last thoughts will grow
    into something positive

    I am buried alive.
     
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    Michele

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    Black Heart

    This pain will never fade
    I am the creator of my own disaster
    Not something good to trade
    Getting low any faster

    No happiness in this day
    the sky full of black and dark
    the feelings full of grey
    the pain forever in my heart

    No chances to run, to get away
    No answers to my questions
    a hard price i had to pay
    for a long way out of my depression

    Someday there will be light again
    a shiny way of life
    but now its lots of frightigning
    until this life will rise
     
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    Michele

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    The robot boy inside of me

    Nothing changed after all the time,
    the same problems, the same fears.
    Hope i can sleep good tonight
    and dream new dreams to live.

    All was good until i saw,
    what i lost, what i'll miss.
    Maybe the next things will be bette, though,
    for start, for live, for new begin.

    I am ok but nothing more,
    happiness or sadness, all the same.
    Maybe i am not really sure,
    but i become more and more insane.

    Good things come, goodthings go,
    i have to live with both of them.
    Is life easy? Answer: No!
    The pain will start and end again.

    The robot boy inside of me,
    all this problems on his mind,
    want to end the pain and misery
    to turn into love and joy.
     

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