This is years old. Its been like a work in progress that i finally finished about 6 months ago. I was stuck on the chorus for ages but i like it now after all the fine tuning. i havent been able to figure out a name yet. sugestions would be awsome....oh and feeback (rap)Everytime i turn around i am bombarded By everyone and everything though im no part of it Its like a running race but wheres the end Will i meet them face to face or will they hide again There is no comfort in this world and no humanity I cant help but wonder when theyll appreciate me You say lifes a gift Well heres mine to you Start thinkin real the world will ruin you Chorus (sing) In this world were all just falling Reality calling But were to far away (rap) to far to understand (sing)Times slipped away, we cant go back Innocence lost We are nothing now (rap) we are too far gone (rap) Feeding lies to everyone who just believe No truth and no fact, they have us on our knees Deceit and betrayal path the way to a life that’s not worth the effort to stay Everything thats said to me i have to question The simplest things become a crime Free thought is a dream, free minds a lie You say lifes a gift Well heres mine to you Start thinking real the world will ruin you Chorus (Sing) So why does everything have to be clouded in this uncertainty I want a life thats free to live Not restricted and stale like the life you give Chorus x 2 with
anyanka, I really like this song. It's nice how you put the lines together. (hope you understand what I just said ) It's very good.