Suicide hanging

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    bleeding rose

    bleeding rose Well-Known Member

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    Devastated I was,
    Pouring rain outside,
    Mascara drooling down,
    As well as tear drops,
    Trickling down my cheek,

    Had come back from my brother’s funeral,
    To find my dead mom home,
    She wore her black dress,
    With blood all over her pale face,
    She had pierce green eyes,
    Eye shadows closed,
    With a tear near the end of her eye,

    Suicide it was,
    Well that’s what the note said,
    Yesterday I lost my mom and brother,
    Today I lost my body,
    But not my soul,

    Never had a dad,
    I was all alone,
    Had to be sent to an orphanage,
    I just couldn’t take it,
    I lost my mind,

    Took a rope,
    Hanged it from my lamp,
    Tightened it well,
    Learnt it from books,
    I was a model student,
    I threw all of that away,
    All my future,
    Because of pain,

    Mom you told me to be strong,
    Yet you kill yourself,
    Not caring about me,
    Jake you told me never to get into fights,
    Yet you get shot in one,
    Do you guys actually think I would be able to take it?

    I’m weak from the heart,
    You knew well enough,
    Yet you both left me drowning in my own blood,
    I suffered but now I’m coming to join you at once,

    As I stood high on my stool I slipped off,
    Unprepared and I died,
    Went threw all the trouble to be with you again,
    But I succeeded at last...
     
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    El Muerto

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    *amazed*
    *loss of words*
    *applause*

    it's the first time a song about suicide made such impression on me...
     
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    bleeding rose

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    thanks :D
     
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    Razan

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    It's.Fucking.Amazing!
    And you thought mine was scary! Yours is amazing, it's like Slipknot, even though you don't like them, but it is and it's a good thing. they're lyrics are good!

    Keep it up or die :lol:
     
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    fallenangel

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    :eek: speechless!

    very real and dark but it's fucking good!
     
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    FreeYourMind

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    That's not bad at all, hope you're not talkin bout yourself eh?
     
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    bleeding rose

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    no no no! Ofcourse not lol :p
     
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    bleeding rose

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    thx everyone for the comments
     
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    Ronin

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    very nice....wish I was cool enough to write like that...... :wth:
     
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    bleeding rose

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    Thanks :D
     

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