Tear,...a drop of emotion

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    Speed Freak

    Speed Freak Well-Known Member

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    Tear,...a drop of emotion
    Anger, pain, fury and joy,
    Smiles given wryly,
    Smiles given coy,
    Each has its own connotation,
    Each an emotion in animation.

    Liquid emotion,
    Crystal clear,
    Flawless formations,
    of a tear......
    So pure,
    So luminous.

    Infused emotions run free & wild,
    like the spirit of freedom.
    Emotions flare
    And spread like fire
    As it spitz out our feelings……
     
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    elocrocker

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    I like your description of a Tear.
    It's really good.
     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    It has a very solid message of a Tear, whence the writer has put much thought into the peice.
     
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    Speed Freak

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    Thanks people..
     

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