Music Unfinished instrumental- Opinions, Lyric themes, Ideas?

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    rcm034

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    https://soundcloud.com/rocket34/5-29

    Haven't finished it, so it just kind of stops at the end haha. It's not mastered yet, either.

    I was thinking a vocal part that follows that octave guitar part when it drops out at 0:25, then gets quiet during that huge buildup. I really like that drop around 1:00.

    What do y'all think?
     
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    Susy

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    Sing about things never coming and fires never burning. Except in the skies and down and pretty much everywhere.

    It's enjoyable, good job. :)
     
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    Try-hard Chimi

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    its nice, good work
     
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    ald_

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    I really love it. I think vocals would be perfect from 0:38.
     
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    rcm034

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    Thanks haha. I'll update it when I get the next chunk of stuff put in.
     
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    Delicious Dave

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    I love it. Are you going to be doing the vocals? If so, sing your heart out! Is the song going to continue from the synth at the end? You should add some keys and have it build up into a final chorus at that part.
     
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    Black-Striped Prism

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    Check your messages please, rcm.
     

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