The Rain Trickling down my face as the lighting strikes when the thunder crashes and lights up the sky with its beauty the moths laying dead on the street the butterfly's laying dead on the grass the fly's laying dead on the car windows all the Insects dead somewhere The wind blowing as its sad as if something upset mother nature,everyone laying dead on the ground blood going down the sewer drains as the rain wash's it away,the murder that night was Mother nature ,the way people treated her she couldn't bear it so she killed everyone,except me The Rain soaking through my clothes as my hair sticks to my face from it being wet the stores on fire the car alarms going off the leafs tumbling along the ground as the wind blows , I walk shivering and staring at the site wondering how this could happen to everyone but not me,did mother nature favor me was I her favorite cause I would sit by the river and talk to her and tell her story's and poems and let her know how thankful I am that she is around did she spare me cause I talked to her ,everyday The Rain flooding the rivers as they over flow the storm never touched or harmed me but the storm killed everyone even the little kids,yet the true killer was mother nature I still don't get it why she spared me,why she let me live ... why out of everyone else she choose me The Rain washing away her sin her murder on the town soon the sky rains fire to de story the body's so that new people can come here and see if she likes them and can let them remain here..forever by,Sexy Kittie Ps:feedback please and let me know if i made a mistake even though i spelled checked my poem
Pretty good. when you said murder it should be murderer though. Also it seemed a touch unorganized, like you just started new lines whenever you felt like it. Are you planning on entering the writers competition?
thank you for your comment and its quite weird when i write dark poems i get in this trance and i just write and let out what is on my mind and i really don't know what the meaning is to this poem but thanks once again for the comment ,Sir